中考优秀作文：我和朋友之间的故事

中考优秀作文：我和朋友之间的故事

征文——我和朋友之间的故事

　　在我们成长的道路上，朋友是不可或缺的风景。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆!某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend And Me”为题开展征文活动，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。

　　要求：

　　故事必须原创;

　　80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;

　　文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

　　参考要点：

　　分享故事(起因，经过，结果……);

　　表达感受(幸福，感动，思考……);

　　. ……

　　A Story Between My Friend And Me

　　There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.

　　高分范文

　　【写作点拨】本文是一篇命题作文，并给出了参考要点。由题目“A Story Between My Friend and Me”可知写作的重点在于叙述故事，并表达感受。写作时，可选取个人与朋友之间印象深刻，且比较有教育意义的事件。叙述个人故事，要用第一人称，且时态主要为一般过去时，表达感受时，用一般现在时。

　　【高分范文】

A Story Between My Friend and Me

　　There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.

　　Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.

　　In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.